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Thomas Buizel Poochyena: Ch.55

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The sun shined down on my face as I slowly started to wake up. I guess that was some sort of dream I had. But it was so weird. Why of all places and things would I have a dream that was blurry the whole way through? It didn't make sense at all. Hmm… it also didn't make sense how my body felt warmer than usual. Sure, the shine was shining on me, but it didn't feel like it was on top of me.

"Good morning, little brother," I suddenly heard right in my face.

I opened my eyes to see Naruto nose-to-nose with me. He was lying on top of my body and his front paws on my arms, pinning me down to the bed. I couldn't move whatsoever as I laid helpless staring at him. I tried to get up, but Naruto had me in a disadvantage.

"Morning, Naruto," I said, as I struggled.

"What's the matter, Thomas?" Naruto asked as his head tilted.

"You know what I'm talking about!" I said smiling as I stopped and looked at his smirking face, "You've pinned me down so I can't move!"

"Oh, really…?" Naruto said with a devilish grin, "You can't?"

"U-Uh…" I stuttered as I suddenly realized what I just did.

It was then Naruto got that glimmer in his eye; the kind of glimmer that makes people know they were in trouble. I got super nervous as he approached my face closer and closer. He slowly open his mouth and with his tongue, licked my face. I don't know how it tickled, but it was unbearably ticklish. I busted out into an uncontrollable giggle fit.

"Nohohoho!! No, Naharuto! No, don't. Please, don't do that," I giggled and begged.

"Don't do what? This?" Naruto teased as he licked my face again.

"YEHEHEHS!! STOP! Stop. Please, Naruto, that tickles. Please don't," I begged as I struggled to get free.

Naruto smirked as he said, "I love your laugh, Thomas. So, I'm sorry, but I'm gonna make you laugh."

It was then I went through one of the most agonizing tortures of tickling I've even gone through. Naruto's tongue was so wet and it sent ticklish feelings through my nerves. I couldn't beg or talk; all I could do was to move my head as best as I can and pound my feet on the bed. Naruto smiled as his tail wagged and he kept licking me.

It was then Sasuke had come in from outside and walked into our base. He saw us and chuckled, shaking his head after folding his arms. He watched us until I was able to get a look of him. I then struggled to speak to him as Naruto kept licking me.

"HEHEHEHEHEELP!! SASUKE!! PLEHEHEHEASE!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!" I begged in laughter.

The Buizel chuckled as he walked over and slowly crept behind Naruto. Once the Poochyena realized who I had called out to, he turned to see Sasuke grab him and pull him off me. He slowly wrapped his arms around his chest and front arms and sat them down, causing Naruto to be sitting slouched and with his hind legs out.

"Um…. Hi, bro!" Naruto said with a smile and an anime-style sweatdrop coming down his face.

"So, Naruto, what were you doing to Thomas?" Sasuke said smiling as he held him.

"Oh, that. We were just playing around, and I was saying how much I love his laugh," Naruto replied.

I smirked as Sasuke looked at me and raised his eyebrow.

"Well, the laugh part is right…" I said, calming down as I walked over.

"I see… I guess it's only fair for if Naruto got to tickle you, I think you should have the right to tickle him back," Sasuke said with a grin.

Naruto's face paled as he gulped and said, "N-No, wait! Come on, Sasuke; I was just playing around with him."

"Thomas, Naruto's extremely ticklish on his hind paws and pads; why don't you just stroke them a bit?" Sasuke said with a bit of a chuckle.

"NO! NO, NOT THERE! PLEASE! I CAN'T STAND THAT!" Naruto pleaded as he struggled to get free.

I smirked as I slowly took a hold of his little paws and started to stroke them. Naruto burst out into uncontrollable laughter. No giggles, no chuckles, straight out laughter. He went limp as Sasuke nuzzled his neck, causing him to laugh even harder. He tried to beg me to stop, but every time he got a breath, I'd poke through his toes, stroke his heels, and do anything it took to make him laugh hysterically. After a few minutes, he finally was able to speak a bit.

"STAHAHHAHAP!! THOHOHOHHOHMAS!! STAHHAHAHAHAAHHAP!!!" he howled in laughter.

I stopped, but held his tiny little puppy feet in my paws. He gasped and panted as he caught his breath. Sasuke smiled as his brother laid his head back into him. Naruto panted as he looked at me with mercy and grace hoping in his eyes. His toes wiggled a bit as I placed my right hand on his feet while holding them with my left.

"No, plehease. Thomas, don't tickle me anymore. I beg you," he begged me.

"Oh, really?" I said as I smirked and just touched one of his toes.

Naruto flinched with a giggle as he nodded and said, "I promise I won't tickle you ever again! I promise! Please, don't tickle me anymore!"

Now, I know that you know that is a BIG LIE. Naruto will tickle me on many occasions later to come. But you know, that cute little face of his laughing satisfied me for a while. So I decided to nod and let him go. I nodded to Sasuke as he let go of Naruto. The puppy sighed a huge relief as he stood up after I let go of his feet. He smiled at me as he came over and snuggled.

"You got me, you little bugger, you," he laughed as I smiled.

"You two are so silly," Sasuke said to us, "You guys are just so ticklish, that you act so silly."

"Oh, yeah?" I said as I smirked and got up.

You know, I hatched a very devious plan then. I decided to make him laugh too. I mean, I knew that Naruto was ticklish. After all, back in my journal, Sasuke had pinned him down and tickled him back in my room. And of course, even as a human, I'm ticklish. The worst tickling I've ever gotten was when Tucker had pinned me down at the alcove when we were eleven years old and he tickled me for a half-an-hour nonstop. Oh, man, I couldn't stop giggling for an hour after that. Of course, I got my revenge, thanks to Kaname and Jocinda…. Let's just say it involved a tree, a hook, and a certain somebody's underwear.

(Hehehehehehe….)

Anyways, I slowly approached with a cute face. Sasuke raised an eyebrow as he stepped closer to me and ended up belly-to-belly with me. He definitely was older and smarter than me; he caught on with my cute look.

"Okay, what are you up to?" Sasuke said.

"Nothing…" I said as I sneaked my right hand into his left armpit and started to tickle there.

But to my surprise, Sasuke didn't laugh or smile. He stood there as he watched me. Shrugging as he sat down with my paw still tickling him, he folded his arms and looked at me. He shook his head as Naruto came over.

"Sorry, Thomas, but I'm not ticklish; you're wasting your time," he said as he closed his eyes.

No, I'm not. I know that Buizel was ticklish somehow. I sat down on his left side and kept tickling his armpit as a smile slowly started to come across his face. Naruto smirked as he sat on his right side and slowly sneaked his paw into Sasuke's right armpit. As he wiggled and tickled him, Sasuke started to smile more and tense up.

"What's the matter?" Naruto asked with a grin, "Why are you tensing up? You're not ticklish, right?"

"I'm not ticklish; I'm just smiling at your attempt to try to tickle me," he said as he started to suspiciously close his arms tighter to his body so our paws couldn't tickle his pits.

"Oh, you liar," I said giggling as I then slowly tickled his belly with my other paw.

"Come on; give up," Naruto said as he took his other paw and tickled his neck.

It was then Sasuke gritted his teeth and squirmed as we kept tickling him. His tail wagged and his eyes closed as he made "gggh" and "pffft" noises. We could tell; he was really close to breaking as he smiled wider. His body became weak as I then looked at Naruto.

"Naruto, how about you tickle his feet?" I said.

Sasuke's eyes widened as Naruto replied, "Okay, I will, brother."

"NO! DON'T TICKLE ME THERE!" we suddenly heard as Sasuke immediately shielded his feet with a laughing yelp.

Yes! We did it! Our tickling then caused Sasuke to constantly move his arms around his body, trying to shield himself from our tickling. But it was futile; Sasuke started to laugh uncontrollably as we got on top of him and continued our tickle assault. We watched his face laugh and grin as we tickled all over his body.

"AHAHHAHA!! ALL RIGHT! I ADMIT IT!! I'M TICKLISH!! STHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHP AHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!" he begged us.

"Um… are you three little kiddies done with your 'tickle fest'?" we suddenly heard.

We all turned to see Zev waiting for us at the doorway. He had his arms folded and leaning against one of the doorposts. He watched us blush embarrassingly and stood up.

"Oh, Zev…. I, uh, didn't think you'd meet us here; I thought you would meet us at Kangaskhan Storage," Sasuke said as he rubbed his head and I grabbed my headband.

"Yeah, I did, but let's face it; my word alone doesn't make people in Pokémon Square safe. If I am to go into public without causing an uproar, I have to be with people that the Pokémon trust," he said with a sigh and rolling of the eyes.

"O-Okay, let us get on our way then!" Naruto said as he shook off his ruffled fur.

"Don't you forget, Thomas," Zev said eyeing me as my brothers and I got outside, "No more doing stuff for me. I have to repay what I owe you."

Despite seeing that as an immature point of view of someone doing favors of charity, I kept that to myself as I nodded and tied my headband on my head.

"Sure. No problem, Zev."

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TICKLE-FEST!!! ^^

Hope you enjoy this chapter; I enjoyed doing this one particularly.

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MrAwesomeMatty

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Gondor234's avatar
Wow a tickle fight